Monthly Archives: June 2015


Two Adams:
Sin through one
The other said “it’s done”.

Two gardens:
One was a paradise
The other where He agonised.

Two thorns:
Sin’s crown from a curse
Then for the King who had it reversed.

Two women:
One bought a lie to our race
The other reveals His eternal Grace.

Two seeds:
Death from the serpent’s lie
And life from the women’s thigh.

Two swords:
One guards the garden in the dark
The other stabs the King in His heart

Two garments:
One covered guilt and shame
The other is a gift that righteousness claims.

Two trees:
One pleasing to the eye yet bad for food
The other brings life and is always good.


Thoughts on reading this poem;

– there are 8 stanzas. 8 is the number of resurrection. Jesus was resurrected in the “eighth day”. Circumcision happened on the 8th day…in the new covenant, our circumcision is of the heart: we could say it is also the number of a new creation identity. Jesus showed Himself 8 times after His resurrection. In Noah’s ark, 8 were saved. The Greek number for Jesus is 888.

– The second or contrasting line is the new covenant resurrection truth that contrasts the first line truth “where” Christ redeemed us from.

– after each stanza’s heading is a colon: which is two dots. A colon Is a pause before introducing related information, or expanding on the “coloned” thought. The two subsequent lines expand on the seed thought in the heading; two dots: two contrasting thoughts: death then life; two contrasting covenants: pre-cross and post-cross.

– The number “two” in scripture has few meaning that this poems highlights. “Two” is the number of unity: the unity of “creation and redemption”; the unity of God and the human race before the fall and after the cross. It can also be the number of “division”: the division of relationship between God and the human race, the division the fall bought between the Father and the Son at calvary, the division of sin and righteousness. It is also the number of “witness”; the witness of Christ to the world of His righteousness, the witness of the redemption to a fallen race.

– each stanza is in order of events: that is, they are progressive. God’s redemption is a progressive revelation of of His nature and person. The Kingdom of God is a seed that grows.

If you allow it, poetry can open your mind and make your think, then know, then experience the quality of the Life of Christ. Many of my poems have meaning beyond the words. Enjoy !.


I’m not who I used to be

You can listen to, or download the song here. (2.2mb. 2.23 mins)

You exchanged my life for your own
Grace came down to me from Your throne,
Now Your life has changed me from within
The Glories of Your goodness make me sing,

Holy, Righteous, Beloved Son of God,
Gracious, Jesus, showed us Father’s Love,
Now You’ve given us Your Glory
Your Truth has now set me free
I’m not who I used to be
No I’m not who I used to be.


Words and music by Peter Hall
Copyright Peter Hall. Scotfree music


Im not what I used to be from Peter Hall on Vimeo.



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Real Love

Download or listen to the song here. (Guitar & Vocal. 1.95mb 2.08mins)


How could You
See my pain
Include me in the
Great Exhange
How could You
Relate to me
Bring me in then
Set me free

Real love
Real love.

How could you
Believe in me
Touch the eyes
So I can see
How could you
Live within
Now everyday
This begins,

Real love
Real love.

A real love that hopes all things
Never fails, believes all things
Never asks what it can’t give

Real love
Real love.


Words and Music by Peter Hall.
Copyright Scot free music.



Cause and effect

The Christian life is not robotic
The Kingdom of God is very organic.

It is not “do this and you will get that”
But a Seed of life on His welcome mat.

It’s not “do good and you’ll get good”
But feeding from Jesus the heavenly food.

It’s not “do bad and you’ll get bad”
But hearing the warnings from His red flags.

It’s not by principles or law based keeping
but letting seed grow, while you are sleeping.

We’re not asking God to create the external
For we already have what we need internal.

It’s not a structure you build so well
but a tree that grows; cell by cell.

It’s not that you know each chapter and verse
But an agreeing heart to His voice you’ve heard

It’s not a formula that you can do
But agreement to the Life inside of you.

The Kingdom of God is not for mechanics
But tillers of soil who love organics.

The Kingdom of God is not cause and effect
But seed and harvest for God’s elect.



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There is nothing

and said to his servant, “Go up now, look toward the sea.” So he went up and looked, and said, “ There is nothing.” And seven times he said, “Go again.” (‭I Kings‬ ‭18‬:‭43‬)


The building has imploded
The bridge has buckled
The floods have done their thing
The fire has licked up the dust
There is nothing.

People’s promises proved untrustworthy
The well meaning preacher’s principles are unreliable
The mask of others have been exposed
Past experience seems irrelevant
There is nothing.

The emotions have numbed
The will has fluttered
The heart see two roads ahead, doubt,
The mind cries out
“There is nothing”.

Times lapses
God is slow
The trapeze artist hovers in the air between release and catch
There is nothing.

Courage for another look
Cloud as a man’s hand
The seventh time…long time
Lifts up the head from between the knees
There is something.


And his servants came near and spoke to him, and said, “My father, if the prophet had told you to do something great, would you not have done it? How much more then, when he says to you, ‘Wash, and be clean’?” So he went down and dipped seven times in the Jordan, according to the saying of the man of God; and his flesh was restored like the flesh of a little child, and he was clean. (‭II Kings‬ ‭5‬:‭13-15‬)

Working class mind

working class

He’s stuck with a working class mind
And grooves in the working class grind
And walks down the working class street
Where the mud sticks under his feet.

Always working to pay the rent
Or the interest on the mortgage lent
Living for the football game
So the weekend just grinds the same.

Then Monday comes around too soon
Five more days on the merry go round
Where boredom numbs his joyless mind
And the rhythm of life has no rhyme.

But Friday night is slowly on its way
And Celtic’s playing on Pay TV
A few pints will help him freeze his mind
And help sustain his working class grind.


I Have Found

You can download or listen to the song here. (1.2mb, 1.17 mins. Guitar & Vox)

I have found
Where I belong
It is my Joy
It is my Song
I am found
In Jesus Christ
My Lord, my life

For He has given me
His life and breath
And by His sacrifice
I am righteous
All praise to Jesus

Words & music by Peter Hall. (copyright Scot free music).

Genre : Praise & Worship for home groups (Written for “The Identity Driven Life” series. This is the theme song).


All these are yours

Listen to, or download the song here. (Guitar & Vox. 2.01 mins. 1.80mb)

God’s grace
God’s face
God’s love
God’s blood

All these are yours when in Jesus Christ.

God’s Word
Take a chance

Life is an adventure in Jesus Christ.

The road gets lighter which each step you take
and winds up higher and higher
To the pie in the sky with your steak on your plate
come get your brain re-wired
and feel the warmth of the fire


Discover what is yours in Jesus Christ
All these are yours in Jesus Christ !.

Words & Music copyright by Peter Hall May 2015



“Respect” is a word many people use
“Respect” is a word many people abuse
Most people spend their life to learn it
Most people spend their life to earn it.

So they can all say “look up to me”
and prop up their false identity
But respect doesn’t come by achievement or funds
or looks, or houses, or car type or chums.

You find “respect” hanging on a cross
not by the gains but by one’s loss
You find “respect” between sky and land
with a different crown on a crucified man.

You can listen or download an “phone” reading here.

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Sea Shells

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“Instagram poem”

If only shells could talk and think
Lazy on the Clyde,
I wonder what they’d say to us ?
“I drift in with the tide…

“You can’t control everything
Though you’ve done your best
Sometimes you need to let things go
Enjoy the view and rest”.